Sunday, October 24, 2010

Three cheers for Microfiction # 54!


I thought I would do an early post for Microfiction Monday (this is my fourth entry for the writing prompt exercise), and here is what I came up with:














Kay posed for the photo, but hated how Sam and Ben stood so close. Dan's rugged good looks were more her style-wait, Dan was looking!
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This caption took some time because I couldn't get past making fun of those swim trunks! Why not give your pen a whirl-remember it's just 140 characters or less, but be sure to link up at the Stony River website.


19 comments:

  1. Love your take on the pic for the day, Susan! We do have fun, don't we? And the pics are a bit of a challenge -- sometimes more than others! Glad you're playing along with us! Have a wonderful week!

    Sylvia

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  2. Nice microfiction. I wasn't sure whether to go with Dan's rather obvious gaze in my entry... in the end I went in a different direction. ;)

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  3. I agree about those swimming trunks! They look a bit like shortie pyjamas! great little micro!

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  4. Hope she gets the man of her dreams! :O)

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  5. Oh my - I hate photo's in the bright sun
    like that -we always squint! Thanks.

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  6. Ah, the fickle female at the picnic...so many choices. Well done.

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  7. Great job Susan. Love the bit of tension in this piece. Aren't these fun to do?

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  8. Sounds like this is heading toward a love triangle! Thanks for the morning laugh. A unique take on this week's MM picture. Have a wonderful week!

    My husband picked up on the swim trunks in his 140 contribution.

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  9. Wonderful, Susan, and always happy to have someone use my name in vain. LOL

    Kay, Alberta

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  10. Was Dan the balding-man in the far right corner of the picture? If so--quite the winner...LOL.
    Have a great week. Cheers!

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  11. Hey that one looks like he has an alfalfa hair sticking up too!

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  12. Those trunks -- yeah! I like your take on it, and can't help wondering about the dynamic between all these folks!

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  13. Thanks for the nice comments everyone! blueviolet, I didn't even notice the tuft of hair until you pointed it out!

    Mama Zen, I just hopped over to your site and like the new redo!

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  14. So she likes the strong silent type...... Better than those other posers!

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  15. What a fun Meme!! Your caption reminds me of those cool greeting cards.

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  16. it fits how he's trying to suck in his stomach as well! very funny

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  17. holy cow, that made me laugh!

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