Thursday, March 24, 2011
Going back-Book Blurb Friday!
It's time for Book Blurb Friday #4! This is where Lisa Ricard Claro, from Writing in the Buff, posts a picture meant to serve as a fictional book cover, and asks us to compose a 150 word summary that might appear on the book jacket.
I was able to conjure up a story pretty quickly the last couple weeks, but although I knew where I wanted tonight's story to go, it took me a while to get there (I'll blame it on end of the week exhaustion.) But no matter how difficult it is for the words to come, there is no better feeling (it's almost euphoric!) than when you read that final copy!
Here is this week's picture and my story:
Where the Corridor Ends
Pepper packed up her office because she couldn’t handle the stress of running a magazine-then she abandoned her friends, living each day without thinking about tomorrow, feeling more and more like an outsider looking in. And when the memories came flooding back, and they always did, her only source of comfort came from a bottle, her new best friend.
Then when a freelance paycheck couldn’t cover the rent of her high-rise apartment, Pepper found respite in a studio tucked inside a centuries old building, and from the offer of an equally old caretaker.
A note scrawled at the bottom of her rental agreement read, "I’ve been where you are now. Go to the end of the corridor if you wish to right the wrongs of the past." And it was here that Pepper stood, remembering the crash and her sister, and wondering if she could really go back… (148 words)
Why don't you give it a try? If you do, don't forget to link up at Lisa's site and read all the other entries!
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How inticing...sure makes you want to go to that door with her!
ReplyDeleteI want to KNOW what's at the end of the corridor. This could go in many directions.
ReplyDeleteI'd like to know if she really goes back!
ReplyDeleteI, too, saw something "mystical" or mysterious about the hallway, but couldn't take it in that direction. I enjoyed reading your blurb...
ReplyDeleteThis offers a rich and intriguing read and I find myself wanting to know if Pepper found eventual peace ...
ReplyDeleteNow that's intriguing! I'd want to read on - love the name Pepper!
ReplyDeleteLooks like a great read. I love the paranormal element (who is that old guy?) and the promise of a journey (without ever leaving that room) that may end with redemption (is that the right word?) for Pepper. Great job!
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That's a great hook. Well written and it makes me want to read the book.
ReplyDelete"Go to the end of the corridor," rings of Alfred Hitchcock. OOH, I like this.
ReplyDeleteSomething I can identify with at times I think. Moving backward to move forward. I love the blurb, I would buy the book!
ReplyDeleteOh ... good one. I love how you managed to get all kinds of backstory in such a few words.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of suspense! Will Pepper find herself?
ReplyDeleteWow! That is excellent. Can't wait to read the rest of the book.
ReplyDeleteIf only we could revisit the past and undo the mistakes and unsay the words . . . this sounds such an interesting book.
ReplyDeleteAnd????? LOL, you actually made me want to read a non-existent book!
ReplyDeleteThis took an unexpected detour for me! I really like that plot-within-a-plot!
ReplyDeleteI love the flow and texture of your writing. You're a talented gal, my friend. Keep writing! You won over at WWP. Here's the link and thanks!
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I am not sure I would open the door...what mistake would it take back?!
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